Author's note: Okay! So, this is the (finished? more nearly finished? much improved, anyway) version of what used to be Chapter Two and is now Part III. Since the previous draft, I've adjusted some of the dialogue so that (I hope) it flows better; I've also written some more material from Obi-Wan's POV, and I had intended to post it concurrently ( Read more... )

So. Yesterday I posted about the issues I was having with Chapter Two. A couple of you responded -- thanks, guys! Now I'm posting a very tentative solution to some of the problems (discussed in this post, where input is still very welcome!). Basically the new version takes place before the events of the original Chapter Two, and hopefully explains ( Read more... )

 Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, and I am not making any profit from it.

Author's note: See here for an explanation of this project.

Special thanks to 

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Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, and I am not making any profit from it.

Author's note: Written as a congratulatory gift!fic for attanagra, who totally deserved it!!!!! [/wild cheering] This particular (re)introduction won't appear in the "framing" effort; but since it is fairly common for chapters of ( Read more... )

Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of absurdity fan fiction, and I am not making any profit from it.

Author's notes: Wacky dialogue ensues!  Plus, Palpatine takes a closer look at Anakin's Awesome Ass.  (Well, who wouldn't?)  Also, behind the first lj-cut, you'll find a list of links to all the chapters by title ( Read more... )

Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, from which I am not making any profit.

Author's note: Wet!Obi is for pronker.  Devious!Palpatine (in other words, just Palpatine) is for ansketil_rose.  Awkward!Conversation is for ladyhadhafang.

Chapter title is from "All The Right Moves," by OneRepublic. 
( dark flirtation and a piece of my mind )

Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, and I am not making any profit from it.

Summary/notes: Three flawed people and two of them know it.  This chapter is for: Rynhaters everywhere (she does not come off well), fans of Padmé angst (a little bit) and people who wanted to see Anakin gain a little self- ( Read more... )

Disclaimer:  George Lucas own Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, and I am not making any profit from it.

Author's notes:  Some time ago, I promised shorter chapters … but then that didn't happen.  This one is shorter, so I am fulfilling a promise here.  The hope is that this will allow for more frequent updates, and also for ( Read more... )

Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  I am in no way making a profit from this story, which is purely a work of fan fiction in any case.

Author's notes:  This chapter comes to you with much love, and also with the following things: 

• extra virtual chocolate chip cookies for ansketil_rose, who beta'ed the previous chapter.
• many cyber-hugs for attanagra, who offered ( Read more... )

Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars.  This story is purely a work of fan fiction, from which I am not making any profit.

Author's notes:  Beta'ed by the incomparable ansketil_rose, but all remaining problems are my own. :)  I really am very anxious to hear what readers think of this chapter; I tried my hand, for a change, at something a bit more personal, ( Read more... )